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== Review 1 ==
== Review 1 ==
The author is appreciated for writing about one of the undiscovered Sufis. It is appreciated that the author has written completely original content that is plagiarism-free. But it is very short—just 855 words. Per the publication's guidelines, all the paid articles must be at least 1000 words, whereas there is no higher limit for articles here. If the author thinks, a long article is needed, they should go for it. There is scope for improvement where the author can expand the article by using scholarly papers, books, and journals to make their research more impactful. There are available books and papers that should be used. The context providing information about his Urs festival in detail, his military career, tabligh, and his Sufi career and explaining why he should be included on this website would be helpful. Also, the primary source (interview by Umar Ashraf of Khadim, Md. Alauddin) mentioned below claims the saint was from Persia, not Ghazni, so it should be corrected. I have mentioned a few scholarly works below mentioning the subject. Both primary and secondary sources should be used for a good paper. * Biographical Encyclopaedia of Sufis: South Asia - Page 160 N. Hanif · 2000.* Sufis of India, Pakistan and Bangladesh, Volume 1 2002. [[User:Peer reviƐwer|Peer reviƐwer]] ([[User talk:Peer reviƐwer|talk]]) 19:03, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
The author is appreciated for writing about one of the undiscovered Sufis. It is appreciated that the author has written completely original content that is plagiarism-free. But it is very short—just 855 words. Per the publication's guidelines, all the paid articles must be at least 1000 words, whereas there is no higher limit for articles here. If the author thinks, a long article is needed, they should go for it. There is scope for improvement where the author can expand the article by using scholarly papers, books, and journals to make their research more impactful. There are available books and papers that should be used. The context providing information about his Urs festival in detail, his military career, tabligh, and his Sufi career and explaining why he should be included on this website would be helpful. Also, the primary source (interview by Umar Ashraf of Khadim, Md. Alauddin) mentioned below claims the saint was from Persia, not Ghazni, so it should be corrected. I have mentioned a few scholarly works below mentioning the subject. Both primary and secondary sources should be used for a good research paper.
 * Biographical Encyclopaedia of Sufis: South Asia - Page 160 N. Hanif · 2000.
 
* Sufis of India, Pakistan and Bangladesh, Volume 1 2002.
* https://youtu.be/LxqQO7MTTJ0?feature=shared
* https://youtu.be/LxqQO7MTTJ0?feature=shared

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Review 1

The author is appreciated for writing about one of the undiscovered Sufis. It is appreciated that the author has written completely original content that is plagiarism-free. But it is very short—just 855 words. Per the publication's guidelines, all the paid articles must be at least 1000 words, whereas there is no higher limit for articles here. If the author thinks, a long article is needed, they should go for it. There is scope for improvement where the author can expand the article by using scholarly papers, books, and journals to make their research more impactful. There are available books and papers that should be used. The context providing information about his Urs festival in detail, his military career, tabligh, and his Sufi career and explaining why he should be included on this website would be helpful. Also, the primary source (interview by Umar Ashraf of Khadim, Md. Alauddin) mentioned below claims the saint was from Persia, not Ghazni, so it should be corrected. I have mentioned a few scholarly works below mentioning the subject. Both primary and secondary sources should be used for a good research paper.  * Biographical Encyclopaedia of Sufis: South Asia - Page 160 N. Hanif · 2000.