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== Review 1 == |
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The author discusses one of the most popular Sufi saints in Bihar. The author discusses various aspects of the life of the Sufi saint but does not explain why Sharfuddin Yahya Maneri is noteworthy among the thousands of Sufi saints resting in Bihar. The author used too many different sections in the research, but none of them are properly explained. A detailed family tree is not needed here, as it is not adding any value to the research. |
The author discusses one of the most popular Sufi saints in Bihar. The author discusses various aspects of the life of the Sufi saint but does not explain why Sharfuddin Yahya Maneri is noteworthy among the thousands of Sufi saints resting in Bihar. The author used too many different sections in the research, but none of them are properly explained. A detailed family tree is not needed here, as it is not adding any value to the research. |
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Latest revision as of 15:19, 25 June 2024
Review 1[edit source]
The author discusses one of the most popular Sufi saints in Bihar. The author discusses various aspects of the life of the Sufi saint but does not explain why Sharfuddin Yahya Maneri is noteworthy among the thousands of Sufi saints resting in Bihar. The author used too many different sections in the research, but none of them are properly explained. A detailed family tree is not needed here, as it is not adding any value to the research. The author should make the article more interesting by adding his impact on Sufism, discussing his Karamat, and discussing his services for the advancement of Sufi ideology in Bihar. A grammar check is needed here; I don't think the current version of the article merits publication. Peer reviƐwer (talk) 11:20, 24 June 2024 (UTC)