Talk:Sharfuddin Yahya Maneri

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Review 1

  • The author discusses one of the most popular Sufi saints in Bihar. The author discusses various aspects of the life of the Sufi saint but does not explain why Sharfuddin Yahya Maneri is noteworthy among the thousands of Sufi saints resting in Bihar. The author used too many different sections in the research, but none of them are properly explained. A detailed family tree is not needed here, as it is not adding any value to the research.

Author should make the article more interesting by adding his impact on Sufism or by discussing his Karamat and by discusing his services for the advancement od Sufi ideology in Bihar.

Grammar check is needed here, I dont think the current version of the article merits publication. Peer reviƐwer (talk) 08:29, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

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